2007年4月12日 星期四
The competition of Mac and Window
It is a age with developing science and technology.We can't live without computer. I will compare two kinds of computer operating system, MAC and Windows. First, MAC and Window use the different compatible software.Developing the software for Window is more than Mac.The MAC emphasizes in the painting.If you work on an art work,you had better use it.It's good for learning art designing.The Window is used by a universal family.And it's software compatibility is also higher.Anyone can use it simply.MAC is more expensive than Window,and it's design also more advanced.So that is why more and more people want to buy it. No matter which system you choose, both of them are the good tools which helps us to obtain knowledge!
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Well done! You know the topic quite well so the content of the essay is good. Pay more attention to English expressions, then the essay will read better. Remember to read my comments and to revise those sentences Ｉpointed out.
Now,I introduce MAC and Window two kinds of comparisons of operation systems.
-->I will compare two kinds of computer operating system, MAC and Windows.
The first,MAC and Window use the different compatible software.
-->First,
Developing the software for Window is more than Mac.
-->is more what? Windows is more developed than MAC?
The MAC emphasizes in the painting.If you work on an art work,you had better to use it.
-->had better + 動詞原型
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=7090&dict=CALD
It's good for learning an art designing.
-->good for learning art designing
The Window is used by a universal family.
-->What does 'a universal family' mean? It is used universally?
And it's software compatibility is also higher.
-->good!
Anyone can use it simply.
-->easily
In spite of using whick kind of them.All of them are the good tools which helps us to obtain knowledge!
-->check 'in spite of'
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=76654&dict=CALD
-->No matter which system you choose, both of them are...
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